Hmm... Not bad at all. It has some 'incongruities' over there and over here, though... but, hey, asides from those, I think that its still a pretty 'accurate' translation, so, good work. Keep up like that.
yeah, I didn't translate everything accurately, I thought it would have sounded weird if it was. I figured it be better to translate it the way an english speaker would have said it, or at least, how I would say it
Gekkotsuki
Hmm... Not bad at all. It has some 'incongruities' over there and over here, though... but, hey, asides from those, I think that its still a pretty 'accurate' translation, so, good work. Keep up like that.
anymany
yeah, I didn't translate everything accurately, I thought it would have sounded weird if it was. I figured it be better to translate it the way an english speaker would have said it, or at least, how I would say it